Amid the Storm

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Game Girl (Newborn Zoner) on Friday, 17-Mar-2006 21:10:12

Amid the Storm

The sky has opened its curtain

Flash and timbre take the stage

Jealous of the moonlight

As passion turns to rage

The radiance luminates steadfast

Of the ever present orb

Faithful in her glory

And intoxicating lore

Yet what’s that in the distance

Rising to full wrath

Accompanied by vapor

And disillusionment in its breath

The clouds they ride like horses

Galloping to and fro

Their riders have gone mad

As flash and timbre steel the show

They challenge any prospect

Who dares to pose a threat

Their arms are sharp as sabers

Their force is stronger yet

Where is your victory innocent light

Who sits picturesque and palatial

Where have you gone bride of the night

As your groom is daunting and glacial

Vowed to destruction

The climax is nigh

When flash and timbre

Reign over the sky

Watch out dear maples, sturdy oaks and pines

As the sweeping plow has no regard

For the footstool of its performance is nothing more

Than a prop it can easily discard

Woe to the audience who claps in awe

Like the ignorant deceived by the wicked

Oppress the earth as one is corrupt

defiled, humiliated and naked

Fickle in its desire

And just as swiftly as rage arose

Flash and timbre take a bow

and take their bidding to another show

Post 2 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Friday, 17-Mar-2006 23:04:21

I love that, and one of these days I will get around to writing it down. if you always write like that, then you are am amazing writer.

Post 3 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Saturday, 18-Mar-2006 17:43:17

The manner that you have taken emotions and conveyed them amid a storm is beautiful almost beyond description. You are one that definitely paints pictures when you write. I take notice that you are a "Newbie" to The Zone...Welcome...and it is that I hope you continue to share your writings penned with us to enjoy. *Smiles

Connie

Post 4 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Monday, 20-Mar-2006 8:18:44

Very very wonderful!

Post 5 by Game Girl (Newborn Zoner) on Wednesday, 22-Mar-2006 14:41:10

Thanks for the nice remarks about my poem. I'll have to see if I can send some more. I also am enjoying browzing through this writers board.